Saturday, March 24, 2007

Editing

Small update on editing... Mark has already finished putting together a very rough cut that he showed me a couple days ago. It still needs tweaking and but the footage looks great. Wednesday we'll see what the newer rough will look like and hopefully get good feedback from the class. :)

1 comment:

Zack Lyons said...

Mark, I didn't get to give you any feedback today in class cause I had to leave early.

A couple things I'd like to say:

I think your film looks beautiful.

Without the voice overs and such I couldn't really understand what was going on in your main characters head but I am sure it will come together.

The scene with the mobsters or gangsters on the balcony smoking I wasn't quite sure what signaled them as bad guys I knew they were the antagonists but wasnt sure why.

In the last scene where the police are taking photos it clearly looked like there was a flashing red light on the balcony. Are you going to Matte it?

I also did not understand how the woman who kissed him had the match that he lit. Or did she also light a match? I was confused.

Thats all I can remember. If I can think of anything else I will let you know. Good first cut.